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Trifecta: Trifextra week Ninety-Two.
This weekend the Trifextra challenge:
In The Scorpio Races, author Maggie Stiefvater writes, “It is the first day of November and so, today, someone will die.” Give us the next thirty-three words of this story, as you imagine it. Take it wherever you like, but make it original and make it 33 words exactly.
Another One Bites The Dust
“Absurd!”,
those words
I’d heard
echoed,
as the jukebox
tune came on.
The music familiar,
lyrics peculiar,
I listened,
while humming along.
Believe, I must,
singing that chorus,
“Another One Bites The Dust”.
Go write one here: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/11/trifextra-week-ninety-two.html?m=1
unaware but underlined 
Quite the challenge. I had fun with this one. And I believe that you, too, have succeeded in enjoying the restrictions of 33 words.
Thank you for that bit of encouragement…I however goofed with the link thingy 😦 I cannot resubmit it either.
It’s the first day of November
and so, today somebody will die
Mercury rises
Freddie sings his heart out
I want it all
I want it now
before it’s too late
before it’s all is gone
before that somebody
is me
I want it all
You should post that!
I likes this…. Nice.
Thank you kindly 🙂
I don’t know how and I was just fooling around:) Thank you though.
Fooling around or not, it’s good and you should link it from your site. The contest ends tonight 🙂
Queen is MY band. Love them. Love Freddie. Huge fan.
Wonderful…I love music 🙂 I really hope you log on the Trifecta site and link up your words, I love them!
It is the first day of November and so, on today, someone will die,
Along with their gifts,
That were never unwrapped,
Left in the darkness,
without the chance to create a smile!
I hope you will link up to Trifecta and post your words…they are quite lovely!
It is the first day of November and so, on today, someone will die,
Along with their gifts,
That were never unwrapped,
Left in the darkness,
without the chance to create a smile!
This contest ends tonight so you really should consider putting it up 🙂
This is good! And it’s true. Every time I see the news, it’s so true.
Excellent 33 words!
Thank you so much for dropping your note, I had fun writing it 🙂
Their music gets in my head! My younger son loves “We Will Rock You”…all must shush when it comes on the radio 🙂
Love that one and “We Are The Champions”….that’s my name so I’m kinda partial 🙂
This is a fun read!
Thank you 🙂 it was a fun challenge. I know I’m new to Trifecta so your words of encouragement mean a lot.
Excellent piece !Am so glad to see you here-welcome aboard:-)
Thank you beautiful 🙂 your encouragement means the world to me!
:-)You are way too kind my friend
Great poem! May Freddie rest in peace. ~ Dennis
Thanks…it was a fun challenge to try and write only 33 words… 🙂 thanks for peeking at my words 🙂
Nice read! You made good use of referencing on this one! Keep up the good work!
Thanks for that 🙂 I’m learning 🙂
This is fun. Sounds like song lyrics.
Thank you for the chance to expand into bigger spaces…I love the 33 word challenge 🙂