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Aurora Borealis, city of Aurora, dawn, far away, Haiku, kiss, Northern dawn, Northern Lights, sky, start, time zones
Northern dawn, named Aurora
Your night sky
Kisses my true dawn, near Aurora
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Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
What a joy to share our first Carpe Diem Special by Alexey Andreyev (1971- ), our featured haiku-poet from Russia. Next to his skills as a poet he has also skills as a painter and as a mathematician. He has a degree in Mathematics. By the way … I hope you all like our new logo for the Specials.
evening sky —
over the city lights
stars hardly seen
(c) Alexey Andreyev
Of course you know what the goal is of these Specials? But I will tell it anyway (smiles), because there are a few new contributors. The goal of these Specials is to write, compose an all new haiku inspired on the one given by our featured poet in the same sense, tone and spirit as the one given. Not an easy task, but it’s a challenge to look in another way to the writings of fellow haiku-poets both classic and modern.
Sky Vani said:
Beautiful!
unawarebutunderlined said:
Thank you beautiful one 🙂
Chèvrefeuille said:
A beauty … very nicely composed haiku inspired on the one by Alexey Andreyev … thanks.
unawarebutunderlined said:
Thank you for offering the opportunity. Did I not share the information correctly? I put his down below. This is my first time of being involved with Carpe Diem, so I’m uncertain of “the rules”.
Chèvrefeuille said:
You did a great job. Here at Carpe Diem we have no rules. Basho, a classical haiku-master, once said ‘now you know the rules, but you have to forget them immidiately, because haiku has to come right from your heart’. So … no rules …:-)
unawarebutunderlined said:
Oh good…I’m a rule breaker anyway 😉 thank you for letting me know that I fit right in perfectly just being myself.
Chèvrefeuille said:
Just feel free in writing your haiku … I write my haiku also without rules.
writerdsnelson said:
Love the Aurora Borealis. I have been lucky enough to see them. My husband and I went on a flight that took you over the Shetlands and back at the right time of year, so you could see them from above.
unawarebutunderlined said:
How beautiful it must have been…
writerdsnelson said:
It was completely surreal because you were looking at them from an angle you don’t normally see. We chose to do it that way as there was a higher chance of seeing them, and it was warmer lol
unawarebutunderlined said:
I bet…I’ve posted a few things lately on them. Maybe one day I’ll be so close to them that I could touch them 🙂
magicalmysticalteacher said:
I’ve seen the Aurora Borealis twice–in the U.S.! Once in Kansas (of all places), and once in Pennsylvania. Unforgettable! Thanks for your words as reminder of those sightings.
Punishing the Night
unawarebutunderlined said:
How wonderful! I just read your entry and loved your take on the challenge. Looking forward to reading more of you in this new year.
Anja said:
Written beautifully as always 🙂
unawarebutunderlined said:
Thank you for peeking in. I need to get busy reading the rest of the Trifecta 3 word resolutions before voting time 🙂 Happy New Year beautiful friend.
Anja said:
I forgot about voting…I need to catch up as well. Thanks for the heads up.
Happy New Year to you as well! (hugs)
unawarebutunderlined said:
We have 48 hours…
WabiSabi said:
I have only seen this sight once in my life time… I was living in Massachusetts…just amazing! Thanks for the reminder of a sweet memory!
unawarebutunderlined said:
Thank you for peeking in 🙂 cheers!
Cindy Baker said:
Beautiful!
unawarebutunderlined said:
Thank you for peeking in 🙂
Cindy Baker said:
I’ll be back for sure. Really love all that I have seen here so far.
Always, thank you
Cindy
unawarebutunderlined said:
Thank you Cindy 🙂 cheers to you in this new year…looking forward to reading you as well.
rjl2727 said:
very nice. i lived in Alaska years ago, and the northern lights are what i miss the most.
unawarebutunderlined said:
I’ve never been to Alaska…I somehow think I’d like to see them somewhere you can almost touch them 🙂 further North. Well if I could stand the cold!
Robin said:
Writing inspired by someone else’s poetry is a difficult challenge. Beautifully done 🙂
unawarebutunderlined said:
Rob, you are so sweet for encouraging me. This is my first attempt at the Carpe Diem…hope to do more and get better. Happy New Year to you 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Wonderful. The aurora is so nice …
unawarebutunderlined said:
Thank you kindly Sir. Happy New year to you 🙂
Johnny Ojanpera said:
This is beautiful. 🙂
unawarebutunderlined said:
Thank you OJ 😀
jannatwrites said:
Beautiful poem! I’d love to see the Northern Lights. Maybe one day I’ll have clothes warm enough to go where they are most prominent. (I’m pretty sure I’ll never see them from Arizona 🙂 )
unawarebutunderlined said:
You get to see the sun 🙂
readinpleasure said:
Beautiful my friend. A wonderful New Year to you. 🙂
nilly writes said:
I love this so much…